Attempt

I'm not so good and I'm still trying many things out, I've taken a look at the "how to hold your pencil" but it was after this <_<. So here's something before it.

http://img124.imageshack.us/img124/3200/12ts7.png

Comments Appreciated

Don't draw them as sluts. That just looks stupid imo. Go over it with a pen, and erase the sketchy pencil lines :) Should look alot neater :D

make the head turned slightly, its very off right now
good details, i dont like the sluty look though. there are ways to be revealing without being slutty.

Sorry, I wasn't going for anything like that.

Dale I was trying to go over it with pen but it seems I made such thick pencil lines it doesn't go over it, just smudges off.

haha you guys are fucked up. it doesnt look slutty at all.
it looks very good for just an attempt, i don't think you need to work on holding your pencil at all, keep practicing anatomy. Draw from real life instead of anime, if you keep practicing anatomy you'll get much better at drawing characters that come from your mind.

it does not look slutty. keep up with your own style man, don't conform to what any one says.

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Originally Posted by Kaleidoscope

it does not look slutty. keep up with your own style man, don't conform to what any one says.

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/agree. do what you want man. i actually like what you've done with this (minus those "wings" i can't really tell what they are, but they clutter the image imo.) The only thing i can see that is wrong with the girl is her head. It seems a little disporportioned, and crooked imo, but maybe that's just me. anyways, keep it up! let's see what you got! :D

I think the drawing is great but the way here waist is twisted is ok, but she isnt getting any leverage to turn that way around. I think you need to have her arm on her hip giving her some twist. . .i hope that the was clear enough sorry to confuse you if i did.
Anime for me is some fantasy, so the atire she is in if i may say "cute".

Keep it up man!