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Pretty...
its a bit busy for a wallpaper..
I like my wallpapers "busy"... What do you think about it as art, though?
Too busy though. Either get rid of the scanlines and grids or significantly reduce their presence. I can't tell what's going on, and even if it's supposed to be abstract, there shouldn't be so much clashing. I do like the text though, that seems to be an issue for most people and you've got it down. Maybe slightly lower the opacity on the text's reflection though, 'sucked in' isn't as easy to read as it should be.
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A major improvement from before. This one's much easier to behold. And you've bettered an already awesome title text. One thing that still bothers me is that the brightest parts aren't very bright at all (save the text, which makes the text look like it's more important than everything else). Lacks contrast in other words. Just be cautious and avoid overbrightening it; this is a wallpaper afterall. The brighter stuff on the top left looks fine as is I think, but the stuff at the bottom right should stand out a bit more, to balance with the text.
Uhhh... IMO the bottom right IS the part that stands out the most... And I agree, it does generally lack contrast... I'll see what I can do...
i like it. good job.
it looks pretty good
