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Seems a bit flat, lacks depth, I dont like the red Bevel/embossed text and there seems to be no real focal point. But it's okay...I suppose.
play with the contrast some. its really dark. i actually think that the best part is your background. the "ink" doesnt look right (mess with the bevel levels). and agreed ^^ about the text. whats lacking is color (read: depth). play around, mess with it.
The idea of this piece is pure chaos, it's good that you don't like it. It's supposed to reflect the chaos that goes on in my mind sometimes. Hence no focal point. The question is basically me asking myself what the fuck is going on in my head.
can't see teh text
cant read the text at all... but liking the bg
the text reads "When do you think I'll be okay?"
Hahah I'm pretty sure this is the longest dead thread to be resurrected by its owner at the Void EVER.
wow...2006....
yeah, well, I've been kinda busy
