Ironman

http://img165.imageshack.us/img165/5...mancopyyb8.png




Motion brushing:
http://img256.imageshack.us/img256/5...ancopy2yf2.png

Smaller Change of text:
http://img148.imageshack.us/img148/4444/test2jl2.png


More ACTION!: Also not use of pen tool XD
http://img227.imageshack.us/img227/3015/test12uq2.png

Was testing the pen tool in this sig :P. I don't mess with it that much.

I'm still thinking on something for the text. This is my old way of making text lol.

lol would you say I have a focal point? :P

Comments Appreciated.

Seen a lot better from you, I don't like how the smudging came out. And the text, your new way is better.

I'm a noob when it comes to Photoshop soright now from what I see in these forums you guys are like gods

:P

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Seen a lot better from you, I don't like how the smudging came out. And the text, your new way is better.

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OMG YOUR GOING TO MAKE ME CRY lol.

The text layout that've used lately doesn't normally go with this type of render. Since it's machine armor it doesn't go that well with a classic looking font. Though I do admit I don't like this that much either that's why I am planning on a change.

When say you don't like how the smudge came out can you go deeper into that. What spacifically isn't pleasent the flow, color, where it's smudge, or whatever it is please elaborate so I can improve on this or other pojects to come.

Thank you for your feed back though :) JUST GIVE ME MORE!!!

i understand what you're trying to do with the light wrapping around his arm, I just don't think it's enough to immediately draw the eye to it. btw, I don't hate the text all that much.

http://img89.imageshack.us/img89/740/testbv2.png

This was also a version for light lines :P. but didn't like his one.

Sorry for not goin into it more. The smudging is really soft, and there is no real flow to it. Also i think the black in the back is really overpowering. It's just overall very messy looking.

it changes to black to suddenly in my opinion

otherwise i kinda like the messiness of it

Yeah, I agree with the above but its still a hot tag.

pretty good, i don't like the smudge effect on this one as much though. And the left side seems to cut off at a perfectly straight line for a bit.