abstract spider

http://star.walagata.com/w/rorin/wall10-12-06.jpg

I don't like the filter render clouds background, but with some more work it could make a nice wallpaper. And i'm all for a symmetrical shape, i just don't think it looks good centred :)

I'm not too keen on the linear dodge effects, neither am I keen on the filters used such as render clouds or wind but I must say its quite a nice picture. Good use of symetry to create the effect but it could use some fine tuning. Good pic lots of potential.

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Originally Posted by catalyst

I'm not too keen on the linear dodge effects, neither am I keen on the filters used such as render clouds or wind but I must say its quite a nice picture. Good use of symetry to create the effect but it could use some fine tuning. Good pic lots of potential.

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Also some of the zoom blur is very noticeable.
Very cool though.

It's ok. I have some critique. I like the main idea, and although I hate filters, your use of the wind filter turned out nice. However, there are many weak elements here. To save us both time I'll simply make a list.

1. The typo - sorry but i've seen this before and I abhor it, sorry dude but might wanna think of individual typo for each piece or a new "logo"

2. The border - these are overrated and often unneeded. I suggest trying a simple 1px black border.

3. The background - already been mentioned

4. The zoom blur - again, already mentioned, but I really don't like it, I think it stands out too much and is overall superfluous to the design.

5. A little oversaturated, but that's just me being nit picky.


Overall, decent job,

Nate

I agree with above. Adjust the saturation a bit, a 1px border or a cinema border if you're going for a wallpaper, and a new bg. Other than that, I love it. gj! =)

How do u make those kind of abstracts? What do u use?