Everlast Signature #4

This Is My Fourth Signature. Hope You Like It :D

http://www.pfhorums.com/backdoor/files/everlast.png

Please Crit =D

1) I don't like popouts.
2) I don't like the colours.
3) Text = *shudder* Sorry. Doesn't really go with the signature.
4) Too bright on the left side.
5) Where did the yellow come from?
NOTE: This is all in my opinion, and.. I'm not that good of an artist.

OK, it is too dark, way too dark, you need some light in there. The render is really hard to make out, I still can't figure it out now.
IMO if you make a popout sig you need a render that is whole and pop it out top and bottom, they just look odd when it only comes out one side of the sig. I actually like the text, but think it needs a different font, I would suggest soething like Tahoma.
Having said all that, for a fourth sig it is very good, and it's great that you're not worried about trying newer, more difficult things like popouts. Keep it up.