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I named this piece after the local Newfoundland band Cyprian's song that they released on their EP. It was entitled Relapse as you could guess. "You're nothing but a Relapse." Was the opening line to the song.
Anyway, enjoy the piece.
http://img344.imageshack.us/img344/9771/relapsedt9.jpg
i like it, but tone down the sharpness i think the contrast of the c4d is enough already, other than that the composition and the font are great!
Thanks alot. I didn't sharpen the image though. =\ It must be just a sharp render or something.
That looks cool as hell. could I use it in a sig?
Sure you can, credit me and show me the results.
From the looks of it, you seem to make good renders, but I think you need to work on the
photoshop / post-work a bit more. The background seems to be nice but the contrast on
the render is a bit too much. When you do your post work, try to duplicate and play
around with the render a bit more. Add effects to the duplicated render and such.
Overall, you did a decent job on this but I think you can do a lot better since making
renders aren't your problem.
The main critisism I have for this piece is the shiny glowly bits, where they go thin, they are too sharp. The edges in general need some anti-aliasing. Give it that and maybe a larger blur on the glow and then re-sharpen and it should look ok.
