Rate + Comment plz

http://img75.exs.cx/img75/1338/xelissig15uk.jpg

Any comments or ideas for improvement?

looks ok, too much open space though. 6.5/10

yeah probably too empty...you might play with fonts in the empty area(not to much)

i like this ice/cold kind of look

i like it, but yea too much open space and the render is too clear. BLEND it dont make it invisable lol.

yep, as Illegal said, make the opacity to 100 and blend him B) but i really like the part where your name are and i think the font is ok.

It's a quite clean and nice brushing you got in the backgorund, and the colors aren't that bad eighter. Don't like the render though, and how it got such low opacity :/, try to fill out all the empty space with a low-opacity/blended render, or just some text. I think you should keep working on this one, good job.

nice renders and blending but its way too plain (the middle is a big open space and thats not cool)

gj - (7.3/10)

nice but why don't you try to put a kind of font in the middle of the pic?
or something more extreme...why don't you try to put a kind of rain or something like that(i mean animation....)????

http://img39.exs.cx/img39/1152/xelissig126vy.jpg

I took your advice and filled out the center with name and a nice brush i found, without over filling the center and blended the render. Is this better, worse?

better