My initials (WIP)

another C4D piece i m working on right now. its still work in progress. i have to smooth out the polygons, add texture and a little more details. i am done with the base and added texture to the focal point. i am still working on everything else. and yeah A.P. are my initials. Comments and ideas most welcomed.
http://img102.imageshack.us/img102/6294/proj2nn6.png
http://img345.imageshack.us/img345/5640/proj2gc4.png
http://img236.imageshack.us/img236/282/sandapsq3.jpg
(plant models from 3dplants.com, and of course i have tweaked them a little bit for better quality. Hair department plugin used for grass.)

Hah, thatspretty cool.
Ground couldnt use some more texture, and the lighting is off alot.
Cool stuff man

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Originally Posted by Henry

Hah, thatspretty cool.
Ground couldnt use some more texture, and the lighting is off alot.
Cool stuff man

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thanks. r u trying to say i NEED more texture or i DON'T on the ground?
yea the lighting is just there to test the shadows and how the base looks in light.

mor texture on the ground imo.

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Originally Posted by Henry

mor texture on the ground imo.

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oh lol i didnt know wat u wer trying to say because u said i "couldnt use more texture" lol. i was thinking of adding small pebbles and gravel in places to make it look more realistic but i donno any easy way of doing that other than making each and ever gravel. lol.

Take away the plants apart from the three that are touching the initials; at the moment, the scene is too cluttered and it looks random.

Otherwise its awesome, love the modelling of the stones.

yeah, lighting looks awkward. I wouldn't have been able to read AP if you didn't say it was there, but I dunno if that's good or bad, honestly. this could look better in color, if done right.

i removed the extra plants, tried a new position for the light but i cant decide what to put for the texture on the ground.

ok i decided what to do. i added an awesome lawn. not all i need to do is add texture to the plants. the lawn took a lot of trial and error and my computer kept freezing cuz the polygons lagged my computer like crazy but i am happy that the effort gave a good result.

Duuude so nice.
Add color and texture to the plants, and maybe add like a dirt patch or something?
FUcking awesome though man!!
Also maybe give the rock a little color, some brown or something