New One

Did this For a battle in Superdudes
C&C plz
http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m...htmarecopy.jpg

i dont like the brushing, text, or the diagnol line effect...sorry i really dont wanna put you down but its just my opinoin...

yeah the diaganal effect can go, it doesn't fit the flow, but other than that i like it

Once again too messy. If that bright spot in the middle is supose to be it's focule point then that's a step forward.