something simple

something simple i made. thoughts?
http://img167.imageshack.us/img167/1728/eyeps8.jpg

Ok, i neeed to change the size. but appart from that?

i like what you are going for. i do think, however, that the "contact" is off angle from the eye. its like the woman is looking slightly to the right but the contact is facing strait forward. know what i mean. i think if you transform with a little distortion it would be a lot better. if you had put this together earlier, you probably could have entered it into SOTW sci-fi. nice.

cool idea, it looks good.. do it with the both eyes and add some effects on her skin, can become a nice sig^^ gj :)

cheers guys
i'll have a quick fiddle with it now

hmm... the original model image was on a bit of a tilt, so its quite hard to get this right... thoughts?
http://img361.imageshack.us/img361/4153/eye2wy1.jpg

I think the metal iris and pupil should be proportionate to the real one, know what I mean?....

Yea they should be the same size. Also, for some reason the face kinda looks funny to me, I think it's that the metal eye isn't still lined up yet or something, idk.

It's a nice concept, just needs a little work.

i did make it a bit smaller than the original iris. maybe thats throwing me off...
k, i'll hae another go

i cant seem to get the red to glow realistically. any thoughts?
http://img264.imageshack.us/img264/801/eye3ed8.jpg