Ok, so this is part 2 of the "amazing website" post. I took alot of the advice that was given to me. I would like to thank everyone who posted in the last thread you were a great deal of help. -now in regard to flash, which some of you suggested, I have not decided whether or not to go with it.
Here is the match up... the image below or the current design at www.superdezign.com ..or should I try again with a fresh design..
I NEED YOUR VOTES!!!!!!!
Much much better. There's just a couple of little things to change with this one.
- Change the post it note from green to a normal paper color. Although I see you were trying to stick to the three color pallette idea it doesn't really work when it's a recognizable object. But you deffinetly got the idea. Looks great.
-Increase the logo size, it looks really really small and out of place up there.
- Delete the vertical divider between the post-it note and the content.
- Thin out the horizontal green bar on top. It's just a little too large.
With those minor changes I'd say you have a top notch design here. It's clean and simple, flows well, looks creative and modern. Excellent work!
I'm not sure how you're planning on going about this one as far as alignment and scrolling. But I would suggest you set a specific sized div (I call it the stage) around 600x400 or whatever this image size is and center align it on the page both vertically and horizontally. It limits the amount of space you have to use, but if done correctly looks very good.
02-07-2007, 10:38 AM
superdezign.com
again, thank you for your help!!!!!!
anyone else have an opinion, I want as much feedback as possible
02-07-2007, 01:31 PM
Likenota
pretty dope dude. i dont like that tack on the paper it looks nub. other then that nicely done. o and btw if ur gonna use the white as a bgcolr please specify it. like <bgcolor="#ffffff"> because people with windows with modified colors it doesnt look good. so yea.
02-07-2007, 02:19 PM
Ben
Pretty much agree with 43.
Main critiscm would be the large green bar below the header, way to large. apart from that + what 43 said good job
EDIT : The holes in the paper look too unrealistic
02-07-2007, 02:23 PM
unit_number_43
just a little support here. Although I do agree that you should make the thumbtack thing look a little more realistic, the note itself (besides the color) looks fine. It doesn't have to look photo realistic to be good.
02-07-2007, 02:33 PM
superdezign.com
so you think the holes are ok? or should i change them up? any suggestions how? and anybody know how i can make the paper look more like a posted note? texture, colors, ect
02-07-2007, 02:38 PM
unit_number_43
just change the color to a less saturated yellow/brown. it'll look fine.
02-07-2007, 02:57 PM
[PHXN] New001
I say its extremely well done :D
0The bar at the top is a little too thick though, like said.
And maybe make your logo a little more noticible, VGJ
02-07-2007, 05:09 PM
Virtue
Very clean! I really like the colors, just make your logo at the top larger!
