dying in process

if we are about self portraits i post this one ^^ c&c pls.

http://img258.imageshack.us/img258/4...tone800zr6.jpg

dunno maybe its better in colorized, but i wanted to do a pic in doutone :) and i know my eyes look like one of those hard heroin addict's eyes but i think this looks good :P

hahaa NOT Lucky

nice real nice...

this is really, really good. great focus and clarity. but the font needs work xD

Dn't use such big text, infact don't even use text XD
nice lighting :)

well ok, i will use smaller fonts, but i still havent find My font, you know, that one what i can use on every pictures.

thanks for the comments guys ;)

This is indeed a very nice shot. A lot of different thoughts come to my mind when I first viewed it.

I don't know what you have dont but the picture of the guy is sort of "dreamy". That could be what you're going for, but maybe if you posted up the original unedited version so we can compare it would be more beneficial.

And if you didn't notice, the flame doesn't really fit in with everything else. It's logical to capture the flame in the shot, but there is some aruroa around the flame making it look "funny".

well the flame is the original, just in that duotone. and ofc if you want i post the original one :)

http://img442.imageshack.us/img442/9...copy400ld9.jpg

on the left its b4 i made it to duotone. but i still dont get what is your problem with the flame :P

Look at the block around the flame, on the one at the top

erm, i can hardly see any difference i think its cuz my monitor :) gonna fix it in no time :) i think its cuz i just cutted from the original, didnt bother with it cuz i didnt saw the difference. ty for warning me :D

color dif. removed :)

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Originally Posted by Dale

Dn't use such big text, infact don't even use text XD
nice lighting :)

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good shot, but the text needs to go