Blue Sky Morning

Probably another WIP I'll never finish, but it's nice to try something out again.

http://img204.imageshack.us/img204/3...behindive0.jpg

s'aight man. I like the photo in there :)
If iw ere you i'd add a few highlights or something on the blue background, just where it meets the clouds... idk xD

I would never be detailed enough to pen tool that many spikes in my hair xD
His body is pretty damn long, lol.

this looks really nice
i cant really think of anything to change/add to it tbh, very nice work

although... i've just noticed that the line between the sky and the blue is very bumpy. maybe cut that straight

Here's the original, I used the arrangement, placing, and the corner sky, but nothing more. I wanted to make the blue thing look more like a ruined wall, and I might do that today. Last night I was trying to add cracks, but I kept on messing up the pressure on my tablet. I was losing sleep over the damn thing last night, taking shortcuts everywhere. I'll touch it up today.

yeah it's not so obvious it looks like randomly placed sky which doesn't make sense unless you pick out more of the detail, which i don't like. Except maybe you could highlight the guy a bit more with shadows and outline's and if you're going to do outline's, don't do those thick line's in black.. make them like real thin with a colour that's a darker tone of the one you're doing, or lighter depends on the direction of light practise with those maybe you could actually finish this and have a bloody masterpiece, good luck

Thanks, I just started on those things you mentioned. The heavy black line was taken out and I've started on trying to make it look more "wall-ish" by working on some grass down on the bottom, and a little perspective work on the wall itself.

yeah the wall needs perspective and shadows, it doesn't really look like a wall.

do a pattern or something, then apply perspective to it to show the angle of the wall