Some Chick

Orig.
http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i2...l/thisisme.jpg

A quick touch up.
No I didnt add the fairey sparkles. :)

http://img515.imageshack.us/img515/1...elwork2jg1.png

very pro mate
its really well done, but subtle at the same time
10/10

Nice work man, although it's a little messy around the edge of her neck. And if i were you i would have given her a white background, or a darker background to make her stand out.

Some little things like adding a few highlights could also make her stand out.

But yeh, it definately worked :D So gj.

Way to much retouching. Face is ok, but the body is too obvious. You lost all the detail in her skin. Just lower the smooth layer's opacity (I hope you worked in layers) and it will be better. The background could use some noise reduction too. With model super smooth and background grainy, it looks even more retouched.
Retouching shouldn't be noticed that easy! Though, you did a good job on fixing the lighting. Try adding a few highlights like I do in my tutorial. Try a light shadow set to multiply over her breasts (barely noticable) and then a highlight directly on the breasts. They will come alive! :O

I guess this was not your own photo? Well then, I won't comment on that. ;P

some things bother me, you could have fixed the plastic looking curls and remove those double countours at her chin and that tiny bit at her ear. also you could have removed the glow from her arm and neck. and the rest is just like rabieshund says.
btw that shiny thing in her nose? does she have a cold?!

also that strand of hair that falls over her face has a little outline of where you didn't touch it.