newest sig. feedback appreciated

i made this for a battle, though i made it in around 15 min. i like the bg and the text. not my best. but i like it.

http://i130.photobucket.com/albums/p...fe-counter.png

Its pretty god kemo. Nice bg. But i would only use 1 render cause with 2 u have 2 focal points and u only want one focal point. Another thing is stick with basic windows fonts till u get used to text i do that makes sigs loko alot nicer. i would also dull the scan lines down a bit. sides that looks great. And the bg goes great with teh guy from half life so good job.

The bg doesn't go with either of the renders at all I don't think. And as said, stick with only one render in a sig, unless you're going to duplicate the same render and smudge it or something. You don't need two focal points in an image of this size.

ok this will prolly not go over well but here goes. I like the idea but instead of both being in the scan line make just one in there and the other like he is standing in front of a TV or large monitor. One looks in game the other looks RL. That make sense? I use multiple renders in sigs some times and the ywork out good for the most part when done right. The only thing I dislike really is both are in the same element. Pick one and move it out of the element and it s a winner :)

thanks for the feedback. i'll try it next time with one focal point.