top one: stock is too big, and the backgorund is too blury.
bottom one: I like the tag, but I hate the text. nice work
02-24-2007, 03:19 PM
Hip Hop
1st one is just bad.
blurry, lighting is wrong, text doesn't flow with the rest of the peice.
2nd one just sharpen it a few times maybe 2 times and add a bit of contrast.
good job on these.
02-24-2007, 04:18 PM
kemo
second one looks ok, the first one is a bit blurry, and the last one looks ok though just work a bit on your text.