C+C :D
http://img84.imageshack.us/img84/327...niels17ry3.jpg
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I think the render is way too blended. You can hardly distinguish between it and the background. Left is bare, and your text needs work. Keep practicing.
yea that render is overblended...at first i was like wat? theres nothing about halo in this. then i found it.
Dark Method and paproksguitar are right. that render is way overblended. good try though