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Hot girl..Nice BG!
Boner. The squiggly like around the text is a little too thick imo.
I like outline of her body you did, nice effect. And plus she is hot but what disturbs me is her ribs are showing so fricken much, its like she has a second pair of breasts.
Thanks for comments. :)
Should I use as my current?
Get the colours and tones to fit, then get rid of or refine the lines around her :) And put your name somewhere else it stands out too much.
You have more contrast on the bg then you do on the stock.. should be the other way round really, or equal.
Nah..I like your other one better.