Cybran

decided to make a little pic based on my fav game at the moment, Supreme Commander

this is the icon for one of the factions in the game, known as the Cybrans
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r...hos/cybran.jpg

this is it after a bit of editing by me
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r...os/avatar3.jpg

any thoughts?

i think the gray needs to go

you mean the smoke?

didn't see this before. i agree with henry, that grey doesn't look good at all.

do you mean the smoke?

yeah, if that's what it is. doesn't look much like smoke though, maybe that's why.

hmm... i'll have to have another go then
ta

Agreed. Drop the smoke and its one of my favs

nah, im gonna redo the smoke, as its boring without it

I think that the smoke should be more "free" if you catch my drift. Longer and wavier to make it look more like smoke. I like the concept alot though.