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I made this for a friend at soccer-art..I think it's one of my best ;)
C+C please!
http://xs313.xs.to/xs313/07106/00000...0000000000.jpg
Do not rip

for me?! thank you!
i like some of the effects, but the subjects way over contrasted, and the light needs work. also the people in the back take away from the subject

Silly Goose! Thanks for the comment btw.

The canvas is very large and the curved lines don't flow at all. Try to make everything compliment everything else.