First Sig in a new forum

Well as title says, heres my first sig here :P

No tuts used.
Its still incomplete, but could use some C & C on it all the same.

Thanks in advance for any replies, im sure theyll help me alot.

http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b3...roject1png.png

(EDIT)

V2
http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b3...ojectv2png.png

(EDIT2)

V3
http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b3...wprojectV4.png

not sure if this is an improvment or not, quite a drastic change.

I'd just work on removing that blackish thing on the nose if possible, adding a border and putting something in there that'll separate it from the crowd.

i dont wanna b to blunt here, so take this in the nicest of ways but the blackish things is very annoying. its distracting and doesnt go with teh rest a the sig at all.

Not bad actually. I'd remove the black on the left, add a border and some very simple text to it. Maybe blend the render a touch more as well.

http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b3...ojectv2png.png

V2, now gunna work on putting the C n C to use :P

P.S never noticed the black spot on her nose xD

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Originally Posted by Digital_Haven

Well as title says, heres my first sig here :P

No tuts used.
Its still incomplete, but could use some C & C on it all the same.

Thanks in advance for any replies, im sure theyll help me alot.

http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b3...roject1png.png

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well...first of all, her face has shadows over it or something dark/smudges on her face. And please try to get rid of the lighting/brightness on the bottom of the sig. It makes the bottom of the sig blurry, hard to see, and it's quite disturbing. But it's a great choice of picture and I like those effects you put on the backround. Next time, make a 2/3 pixel border~~
^^
If I were to rate it, it would be 8.5/10.

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Originally Posted by mikasa

well...first of all, her face has shadows over it or something dark/smudges on her face. And please try to get rid of the lighting/brightness on the bottom of the sig. It makes the bottom of the sig blurry, hard to see, and it's quite disturbing. But it's a great choice of picture and I like those effects you put on the backround. Next time, make a 2/3 pixel border~~
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If I were to rate it, it would be 8.5/10.

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:) u looked at wrong pic lol, but thanx for the reply.

(EDIT: maybe i shud put v2 at the top )

the render should be cut out more properly. Like the whole sig looks all pixelated in my view, there's lots to improve.

I like v2 better, just blend the render a little bit more. Go around the edges with a soft, round eraser

Added V3.