[WIP] Pen-tooled Magnum

I drew this for a school project 2 or 3 months ago. My teacher was like "As much as I would like to let you use this I can't because you aren't supposed to draw weapons in school."
Decided to pen tool it recently. As much as I hated the work I like the outcome. I'm going to start coloring soon, just wanted to see what you guys think and see if there was anything I should fix.

http://www.hostmyfile.info/ufiles/2182/Magnum.jpg
I shrank it to 50% of its original size so any mistakes will be magnified 2 times more when I'm done. Please let me know if you see anything :) Thanks
Oh and I drew this from Halo 2. I sat there and zoomed in on one and started drawing. Did the same for the plasma pistol but I didn't get a good sketch.
Here's the original sketch, i's messy but that's why its a sketch :D : http://www.hostmyfile.info/ufiles/21...num-sketch.jpg

needs more detail imo, and i suggest you shade it before colouring it. but so far it looks pretty crisp

Why do you have lorem ipsum written on the side, hahah? :)

It's pretty neat man, idk what else to say really.

Nice line work, hah :)

yeah more detail, and maybe thinner lines to make it better.

take a real pic of a gun and pentool it tomake it lok like line art

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Originally Posted by Dale

Why do you have lorem ipsum written on the side, hahah? :)

It's pretty neat man, idk what else to say really.

Nice line work, hah :)

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Hah I drew this and didn't know what to put there. Then Shadow Warrior came to mind lol. Thanks :)

It isn't done yet though. There will be more details and it will be colored. It's a work in progress lol. I just wanted to see if you guys saw any mistakes in my pen tooling.

And I'm going to try and convince my parents into buying me a graphics tablet. It's going well as far as I can tell lol

Why is the trigger guard so big? And is the clip straight? And where does the bullet casing exit?

Its a drawing, it ain't supposed to be exact haha

Looks okay now finish it !!