smudge sig (plz c&c)

here´s my latest. i know i have to improve a lot. so i´m very happy to get comments. thank you.



http://img164.imageshack.us/img164/2907/alcohol3js1.png

personally, I'd do away with the scanlines across the whole sig; they really dont do anything except cover up the nice BG. And, like most anyone else, the text could use some work. But a nice start.

I actually think the text is fine. Maybe erase little bits of it. Great concept though.

Love it all...except for the scanlines...

-konfusion

thanks a lot^^

after your comments i see that the text should have been at lower opacity. besides of that i´m happy with the text so far.

the scanlines became useless in the end of the designing process as the BG got more and morwe detail and depth but for some reason it let them in... guess you helped me.