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nice :D you can still work on getting rid of the hard edge lines though (if that is the look you were going for...) i suggest getting a kneeded eraser if you dont have one already, they are very handy, and even if you dont use it, they are always fun to play with :P lol. Youve captured the form really well, and the eye lashes look great.
work a bit on the bridge of the nose and the pupil, they are a bit poorly aligned, but as no ref, that is understandable.
We used kneaded erasers in art class today! :D You can squish it into funny shapes.
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Anyways, this looks great! I love how you did the eyelashes, they much more realistic than my drawings. ;) The only thing I would change is the size of the pupil. It looks a tad bit too small, and I don't think pupils move over that much, even when looking up and to the side. I'm not positive though... I'll have to look that up. :p
The positioning of the pupil is bothering me. Otherwise, it looks great.
Great eye, but the nose looks a little weird.
You should try the whole face