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OK, here i tried again, this one really sucks but i wanna see what you guys think. the animation kinda sucks in some parts i know, for those of you that havent seen the movie, the render is a demon and i kinda drew hell arond him :-). please comment + rate.
http://mpairsoft.xylenhost.com/nate/demon.gif
nice job but try to make a BG in ur *be afraid* frame :)
(7.4/10)
now thats hot shit rite there
I really, like the fading part of animation looks great. I think you could work a bit with the text, it doesn't seem to fit that well, and maybe you can find a betterfitting font? A vreepy one would look cool, maybe something like the one that sais "be afraid", which looks cool, but it looks rather simple to me, so does the blood. Don't know if you can do anything about that. I think 2-intenze has got a quite good idea there, a dark grunge bg wouldn't look bad under the be afraid-text.
However, to sum it all up I think the things that could need some improvement would be:
# - Illegal text: maybe font & color
# - "be afraid" part: bg? color?
# - maybe blend the first render up to the right. (not needed)
Great job, this is one of your better ones fo' sure, don't let go of it xD I hope you do some updates, cous it would look awsome. Great job.
hey thanx, im glad you guys liked it, im at school right now, i may revise it later. i think i may fade in some grunge brushes or something cuz the whole point of the black bg was that shadow thing goin across the scene. i was lookin for a kinda midevil got hic lookin font for "illegal" but do you think a grungy one would look better?
yeah a grunge one would look better :)
I'm not 100% sure, but I don't think this one fits that well. Try another midevil one or a grunge and see how it works out.
a little add on jerner's sum it all up
However, to sum it all up I think the things that could need some improvement would be:
# - Illegal text: maybe font & color
# - "be afraid" part: bg? color?
# - maybe blend the first render up to the right. (not needed)
# - make the animated part when the blood are 100% opacity stay longer and maybe then make it fade back to the Illegalx17 part. :)
overall i really like it, i will rate it 8.8/10 thanks to the grunge work at the Illegalx17 part :rolleyes:
yeah thats a good tip oldeback ^
