A Terrible Future

This is a pic i made didnt make the buildings but i did a lot of editing to them. made almost everythign else.

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/52220305/
http://img127.imageshack.us/img127/7...nplanetzh6.jpg


And yea i know the quality is bad i saved it in PNG 24, jpeg everything and the quality just would not come out right.


CnC appriciated.

Anyone?

what are all the things floating around? its definitly a cool idea, and its carried out pretty well.
some of the brighter spots of smog could be dimmed down, and maybe add a fire or something, idk.

Ooo, very interesting. We're all gonna die from a smog attack! D=

it misses contrast, focus and a lightsource.
but you did nice work on the objects.

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Originally Posted by Henry

what are all the things floating around? its definitly a cool idea, and its carried out pretty well.
some of the brighter spots of smog could be dimmed down, and maybe add a fire or something, idk.

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The flying objects are like planes and things but its a little hard to tell. I never thought of adding a fire i might edit it and add a fire.

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Originally Posted by Falc0re

it misses contrast, focus and a lightsource.
but you did nice work on the objects.

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Yea, i had some problems with the focus. WIth the whole ligthsource i wanted it too look very dark, so it'd make it feel sader, and more terrible, but i should add some type of light underneath the smog or somethign your right about that.

Thanks for the CnC guys i really appriciate it, ill maybe edit it and repost later.

be sure to do this. this could look awesome with a few adjustments.

I like it, but it looks kind of 2d and out of perspective...

-konfusion

yeas it is a bit out of perspective 1. because i wnated to make it look weird. and 2 is because while making it i fuked up and hit a problem and i didn't want to start over so i had to edit it andit didn't turn out right but im too lazy to start over again. lol thats a mouthfull.

Alright i updated it and added fire and a lightsource, sharpened the whole picture 2 more times as well. Better?


http://img512.imageshack.us/img512/5...teditedmb5.jpg