Timeless

I've sorta been in a rut lately where I can't make anything I really like, and I've been in photoshop a lot just messing around seeing if I can get myself out of that. I came up with this and I kind of like it.

v1
http://i131.photobucket.com/albums/p...AudreySig5.png

v2
http://i131.photobucket.com/albums/p...udreySig52.png

v3. I thought I'd do another version. Is this any better?
http://img463.imageshack.us/img463/1...eteredocs6.png

Oh wow, so much you could improve on but so much you got right:

v1: background = great, stock = overly contrasted and brightened, text = the green is really out of place, take a colour from the stock and move it around a bit

v2: ok, the background just looks rubbish tbh, i get the feeling you only did that so the text would stand out more?

^ agreed exactly, plus that duplicate on the right is pointless. doesn't work for this

v1 for sure, but v2 has more potential.

Hmmm
I made some changes to both...
http://img406.imageshack.us/img406/1...g5lctncmb4.png
http://img406.imageshack.us/img406/5...52lctncxp8.png

Did another version.

http://img463.imageshack.us/img463/1...eteredocs6.png

Why was my topic moved to Signature Tutorials?

i think the green text rocked. v3 is ok, but the blur and the scanlines are obsolete.

yeah, why was it moved?
I'm not sure whioch version I like most, but v1 and v2 seem most appealing