Hmm...

http://img441.imageshack.us/img441/9...rsshanetz4.jpg

What do you think? CnC plz.

cool! the render fits well. maybe set the white things on the BG to color dodge or something. and give the outer sides of the sig some black areas. cool sig.

yeah, the thing is poorly contrasted and sharpened looks messy and unfinished

I think it looks good.
Maybe take away the 1px white stroke off the text and create a contrasting colour to the blue. Probably orange. Try that.

As for th right hand side... It kinds spoils the effect created on the left and middle. As the image has no blue on it; which was incredibly effective.

gj job love the left side of bg, but i think its to bright around his head and the bg isnt good in the left upper corner dont fit well there. the text is okay.

http://img383.imageshack.us/img383/4...sshane2xm3.jpg

Made some adjustments... what do you think?

Much MUCH better.
Still, i think it requires a bit of contrast between that really strong lighting and the main render.
The text needs some fixing. It isn't nice in that colour or in that position.

Photo filterrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr.... *fades*

Err... photo filter?

image > adjustments > photo filter