break free

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/55191778/

kinda in the style of that sig i made i guess.

I give you an A+ for effort, cause I can tell what your going for, but I think its missing something. Something like a stroke or something, It just doesnt look right.
At the beginning where the spikes are dense it looks freaaakin awesome, but as they spread I feel like everything missing something little :/

Still A work, but if you can figure out what's missing I'd give you an A++ ;)

Some darker colours may have helped, to give it depth i suppose.

Basically more and more texture man :)

But, good work. As it's bright and energetic