for a band

a couple of buddies of mine made a band... and hired some amateur to do their logo design. It looked REALLY bad... so I made this for them instead.

http://star.walagata.com/w/rorin/vamorlogo_copy.jpg

looks good man, so im guessing punk rock, or hard rock band?

it's hardcore-esque... I was gonna do splatter for it... but that's pretty whored out imo

Theres a line in your logo going across the top which looks to me like a low opacity glare/shine? I would take that off if I were you because it seems really dirty and look s a bit liek rock, and rock doesn't usually shine that much. I dunno...Thats just my opinion.