My Lyrics

these are just some lyrics i came up with a while ago...its just a way for me to get out all my frustrations with life...enjoy

Ongoing Battle (Til' Death)
Its a constant battle
Between the light and the dark
Side of my mind
Some nights I wake up screaming
From the visions in my minds eye
Sometimes I just don't have the strength
To close my eyes again
How can I explain it
To where you can understand
When you don't even care
Still stuck in my mind's demon stare
Some nights I wake up screaming
From the visions in my minds eye
Sometimes I just don't have the strength
To close my eyes again
I've become a servant
To the dark side of the animalistic mind
But I swear on my grave
That I will rise up with the light
And take back control of life
Some nights I wake up screaming
But am I really dreaming
Sometimes I just don't have the strength
But the heart in me
Hasn't given up yet
Its an ongoing battle
That I will see through til death

wow, thats nice :)

I really like it, now for some music ^^

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Originally Posted by Bloodtears

wow, thats nice :)

I really like it, now for some music ^^

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agreed

great execution of lyrics you brought the reader into ya lyrics and made him/her feel how how you feel.

E for execution...keep it up' poetry is another form of gr8ness