prolly not that good but hey wth

http://i164.photobucket.com/albums/u...142sigcopy.png

i like it i guessthats all that matters

This isnt bad, your render needs to be blended. Remove the text in the corners and keep it on the gun. keep up practise.

lol I started somethin with exact same render and basicly what daemon said but other than that it doesn't look too bad

I like it, blend in the render a tiny bit and it's pretty good.