Selene the vampire

http://i182.photobucket.com/albums/x...ve_/Selene.jpg

Ok the white spot does suck...

I tried to maintain what you see on the right but i wanted it to fade away i think...I'll finish it then show you :).

C&C

Yes that big white spot in the middle of the sig really does take away from it. Also the border is very meh to me. Maybe a 1 pxl black border will look better, or even better yet cinema borders. Text needs some work. It so blatant and right there in your face. Tone it down a bit and make it less visible.

My worst one by a mile and you are absolutely right...

Just change the border to either the 1px black porder like Scar face said or the cinema border like Scar face said as well and minimize the white spot just a little bit on the right side It'll make it look better imo. Overall nice job its not bad

I dont like the Blur lighten thing going on in selenes face that kills her look, your text could be improven to i like the right side though arfter the white spot.

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Originally Posted by Blazer

I tried to maintain what you see on the right

C&C

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I can't finish it right now, this wasn't originally on my computer i had to get a link off a friend because he has it.

and its weirdly waves around the side of the renders head