Perfect Seductress

My entry for the photo battle in the battlegrounds.

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/61068058/

OH YEAH! Thank you thank you, it's not often someone posts photos of people on here and especially not like this.

Good model and good pose.
I have some criticism though. First of all, the hair in her face is very disturbing, especially since it covers her eye. you should also try to position her further away from the background to avoid that harsh shadow. And since you used a sheet to get white background, put another spotlight just for the background to get it brighter and then try to get rid of as much detail in the background as you can. I know it's hard without the right equipment, but you could probably improve this a bit more. What did you use for the wind?

I hope you keep shooting and directing people. I'm really happy you tried to do a studio shot. :)

Pretty cool. The wrinkle in your sheets is pretty distracting though..

Thanks guys. Yeah, it was kinda... impromptu photo shoot. I shot it in my room without any actual "spotlights" rather a couple worklights my dad has. The wind was done using two regular fans set up on a table. If I had more time, I would have ironed the background to remove the wrinkles, but worse comes to worse, i can fix that in photoshop.

do not hesitate to retouch ur photographs more... those wrinkles cudav been easily edited out.. love the pose.. but not the model.. well model's fine but it looks like u didnt spend enuf time on the makeup.. see if u wanted some wind u shud make sure her hair is jus a lil wet.. wet enuf to still waver in the wind but not too wet that the hair becomes too heavy for the wind to lift em..

i remember this cuz my cousin used to model for some ads and her makeup guy used to mix Wet-Look gel with a lot of water and use that on her hair..

i wudnt hav spent so much time typin if i dint like this :)

gj.. hope to see more of this kinda stuff..