geist

V1
http://i60.photobucket.com/albums/h4...z/geiistv1.png
V2
http://i60.photobucket.com/albums/h4...z/geiistv2.png
what do you think???
c&c

v1, v2's color is washed out

v1 , but i dont know if the blurry to the extreme bg is good or not.

I dont like the bg to this render, i think this render needs a busy bg and the blending could be better try do that.

what about the text does it look better off in the corner(V1) or right with the render(V2)?

the text dont fit the render or the bg m8. you need a new font