Life Has Limits, SOTW entry

here is my very first SOTW entry. Comment and all that stuff thanks.



http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n...1es/Limit5.jpg

Nice concept and all but needs more work IMO...
I like the lighting and blurring/smudging but needs alot more work.
Text is probably your best.
Colours also need some work...
But really nice idea :)

Hmm i agree in ways with what NSR is saying but then i also disagree.
The fact its so plain works rather well i think.

I'd just maybe lower the position of the text :)
Other than that, i like it :)

sorry but i don't like it ;(
No comment. My eyes just dont like it..

It's a nice idea, and I can't see what I would change, but I do feel it's a bit empty.

Yearh the idea is nice but the right site is kinda empty but i dont know what to do with it since the focal point is the hands. make text a little not so stand out

Thanks for the comments guys, I had trouble doing this one. I originally had the hands in the middle but it didn't work well. When I got to the point to where i am now with it, I had no clue what to do add.. Got really stuck.. Daemon this is what I needed help on. If I come across something that will fit ill add it but im pretty sure there isn't much more I can do or at least think of. Thanks again.

I updated the text, made it darker, it blends a lot better.

http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n...s/Limit5-1.jpg