Out of nothing (vintage)

This is my first time doing this, i have seen a lot of cool pictures out here with similar effects on it. Picture is taken by me, played around with some adjustment layers and textures.
C&C please.
http://fc04.deviantart.com/fs20/f/20...monGFXvoid.jpg

looks pretty cool, sweet colors, but i don't like the text

The text is slick, but definitely doesn't fit the piece. Just too new age/ipod smooth. I'm liking this emerging style on here though, vintage wise.

Get rid of the text and get a thicker border! Good job. :)

i like it, very cool depth of field

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Originally Posted by Henry

looks pretty cool, sweet colors, but i don't like the text

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Thx any suggestions to the text? font?

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Originally Posted by Virtue

The text is slick, but definitely doesn't fit the piece. Just too new age/ipod smooth. I'm liking this emerging style on here though, vintage wise.

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Thx glad you liked it

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Originally Posted by MartinBabies

Get rid of the text and get a thicker border! Good job. :)

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Thx okay i might add a thicker border but now im going to bed:)

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Originally Posted by cameron

i like it, very cool depth of field

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Thx glad you liked it:)

For text, go for a serif font. I can't think of any off the top of my head, but... Georgia or Garamond? Those are what I typically use. Also search Dafont.com, though.

light source on the flowers maybe? just imo

i wouldn't use any text on the image.
but if you have to, i'd also say a serif. the placement is fine, but you might also try next to the upper flower thing.

I'd loose a bit more color, to help pull of the vintage look.