Work In Progress, what should i do?

I know how to use photoshop, and c4d, but ive never really intergrated them and im trying to get a look of some recent posts some people have made, like fatique from jorrne

http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a2...unfinished.png

anyone?

Usually when brining C4D work to PS, you dont have it so... idk spacey.
I just feel that theres too much space.
The boxes are good, but they dont cut off right where it meets the render. Some actually overlap slightly.

For a first combo, I'd say good effort. Just keep'em comin.

ya i really just dont know what to do with it, maybe its not the best c4d for the job