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Very good just in the bottom right corner the giant brown spot doesnt fit in other than that i like it al ot.

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Originally Posted by Fur

Very good just in the bottom right corner the giant brown spot doesnt fit in other than that i like it al ot.

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I agree with all that

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The giant pen tool line, try making a it a bit smaller.

That pen tool looks kinda weird there imo. Also, neat background, but i think it doesn't tie in with the focal. Nice text though.

I think you did a good job i dont think the pen is to big. I also see the brown spot just clonetool some of your bg into that :) nice bg