another halo 3 sig

I made another halo 3 sig, i just love halo 3 so much! =PP i guess, plus i found a nice-ish stock to work with
i was somewhat happy with the outcome
but i want your opinion
C&C PLEASE :D

http://i190.photobucket.com/albums/z...hotdazcopy.png

V2, darker
http://i190.photobucket.com/albums/z...darkercopy.png

i dont like the text, but v1 for sure. its pretty cool and i like the flow.

yeash, as you know, i suck at text

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Originally Posted by Bloodshot

I made another halo 3 sig, i just love halo 3 so much! =PP i guess, plus i found a nice-ish stock to work with
i was somewhat happy with the outcome
but i want your opinion
C&C PLEASE :D

http://i190.photobucket.com/albums/z...hotdazcopy.png

V2, darker
http://i190.photobucket.com/albums/z...darkercopy.png

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damn, halo3...freakin XBOX LIVE!
xD
I like the second better.

Im going to have to say v2 is a lot more to my liking. The first is indeed tooo bright. Like you said, you suck at text, so im not going to go there. You've come a long way since you first came here. Keep up the good work.

lol... someone help me with text! =((

is there supposed to be light in the top right? don't see any--looks like fog :/ notice the highlights on the dude are yellow, so they aren't consistent and don't blend :( that and text. otherwise, it's cool.

they are abstract clouds i think it was part of the stock that i messed up, but yeah i understand where ur coming from, it doesnt look great

Nice one but yes the light again seem kinda foggy try to fix that:) also the text needs work placements such as font.