venom sig request

http://i190.photobucket.com/albums/z...OBSSIGcopy.png

some one my clan website asked me for a sig, this was the outcome
C&C please

and heres a version that i made for myself, cuz i have to, its going up against cheddar in a rematch im pretty sure...

http://i190.photobucket.com/albums/z...forme1copy.png

so C&C please

oh and BTW.... i know the text sucks... im horrible at text, try to rate it without text, unless you wanna give me ADVICE ON THE TEXT TO MAKE IT BETTER ON HOW TO DO IT!! cuz all i hear is
"Text sucks"
"Text ruins it, take it off"
"Use colors from sig"
and every time i try the one listed above.. it makes it worse

i like the colors for it, the render seems to hiden maybe try less feathering with him.
With the text id just suggest using the blending options and putting like stroke to overlay and then put the outer glow on so its outlined. if it is to dark put a drop shadow on it but put the distance to 0 and then put the blend to normal and pick white will make another glow behind the text to bring it out.

I don't have some of those effects ^^ i use elements 3.0, but i can do some of em, ill work on it, as for the render, i dont believe its too hidden =O but wutev, thanks for the C&C