sig request proto

okay im working on a sig request (halo 3 of course... *sigh*) and i wanted to know what you guys think and what i should change about it so i can restart it

http://i190.photobucket.com/albums/z...n7thv2copy.png

c&c =D

Everything is perfect except the render I couldn't tell if it were Halo or not cause it actually looked like a tau empire cruiser battlesuit from Dawn of War dark crusade and you should lighten him up a bit

didn't even notice the dude at first. the focus right now is on the light in the middle right. i'm assuming you don't want that.

one way to maybe fix that without starting over is to blur the background some and sharpen the dude. if you do that though you'll need the dude to be cut out well or else the sloppy erasing will just become more noticeable.

yeah, i didnt like how the render fit in either, i ended up taking it out and making another signature for a different person with it ^^

http://i190.photobucket.com/albums/z...ependscopy.png

i like it alot better without render... i thought BG was perfect too ^^ render just didnt seem to work with it

....im kinda having trouble with spotting the render, but the bg is perfect. i think a new render is in order.

Yeah, I took out the render on the second one so yeah, i know render didnt fit =\ oh well liked BG ^^

i think it looks good even w/o a render
not all sigs need renders to look good

Yeah I know =P, my second signature under :Favorite: is made completely from scratch pieces, no renders nothing (not like picture renders but like c4ds, brushes, lines, designs etc)