Alicia Keys

Whew! Finally done. I spent quite some time doing this one. Went through 3 different versions before finding something i liked.

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c7...iaKeyesPNG.png

c.n.c plz :D

mmm... I LOVE IT... <3 :D
really good job. ;)
I love text... :) BG is also amazing ;)
dunno any words so say bad about it :) ;) :)
everything goes so together.. <3
nice job... ;)

and maybe tut, please? :)

I feel that the text is a bit randomly placed. But I like how it is pretty discreet. I also think the render looks a little bit oversharpened. There is some pixelation in there. I would also have placed the render a little bit more to the left to help the composition. When she is looking to the right it feels a bit "unnatural" to place her in the middle.
But the colors and background are well made. Focal point is easy to find and overall it looks pretty good. And I don't know shit about signature trends and stuff so I just give my criticism as if it would have been a photograph, hehe. But it should be pretty much the same thing, wouldn't it? Good job!

Ya, I agree with martin, the render should be about a 1/2 inch to the left, maybe more.

It looks a little over-sharpened

Everything else looks pretty good.

If you asked for a rating, I would give it about a 7.5/10

It looks good but the others have already pointed things out a bit to sharp but not much, also the text as martin says looks random placed. But overall a killer sig nice job

thx for the comments
as soon as i get the time ill try to fix it with the suggestions

I agree with all the above nice job. The only crit i have that hasn't been said is get rid of the scan lines if ya can. It's really killing the sig for me.

oh i already did that like 5 min after i had finished everything lol
i thought i had posted the one without scanlines though

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Originally Posted by Lordemir

oh i already did that like 5 min after i had finished everything lol
i thought i had posted the one without scanlines though

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Great minds thinks alike :D