self portrait

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12-17-2007, 11:51 PM
Arkanian

self portrait

my self portrait. I need to fix the left shoulder...

http://xs222.xs.to/xs222/07512/mecartoon4.jpg
12-18-2007, 03:29 PM
Arkanian

no comments?? :P
12-18-2007, 03:50 PM
cC.Aleksander

Sick work dude.. Just plain sick.
I love it
12-18-2007, 07:15 PM
VoodooGypsy

I don't know what you look like, but I'm guessing it is pretty close to what you look like.
It rocks though, I lub it.
12-18-2007, 07:40 PM
f y a s [k] o

I think it's pretty damn good. I'd never be able to do that. So with that in mind, just take these criticisms as someone who's looking in from the outside.

Your shading needs work. Especially under the eyes and near the neckline.
Fix either shoulder, personally the right shoulder (don't be confused, that's the one on the LEFT side of the page) needs to be more like the left. It's tooooo rounded.
The ears are a bit whack, but I HATE HATE HATE ears, because I can't ever draw them. :]
Your hair needs a bit of work, either in the picture or in real life, I'm not sure which.
The right collar (again, on the left side of the page) needs a bit more depth. It doesn't come down the chest of the shirt at all. It looks as if you've got a collar coming out of your neck! (Ouch.)

Otherwise, a really solid piece. You've got some good coloring here.
12-19-2007, 03:17 PM
Arkanian

Quote:

Originally Posted by f y a s [k] o

I think it's pretty damn good. I'd never be able to do that. So with that in mind, just take these criticisms as someone who's looking in from the outside.

Your shading needs work. Especially under the eyes and near the neckline.
Fix either shoulder, personally the right shoulder (don't be confused, that's the one on the LEFT side of the page) needs to be more like the left. It's tooooo rounded.
The ears are a bit whack, but I HATE HATE HATE ears, because I can't ever draw them. :]
Your hair needs a bit of work, either in the picture or in real life, I'm not sure which.
The right collar (again, on the left side of the page) needs a bit more depth. It doesn't come down the chest of the shirt at all. It looks as if you've got a collar coming out of your neck! (Ouch.)

Otherwise, a really solid piece. You've got some good coloring here.

thanks for the good cnc, ill probably go and fix some of the things u pointed out.