I did this pretty quick, didn't follow any tutorial so its not very good. This is my first ever image I created in CS3, I've only done like backgrounds and stuff from TuTs before.
I kept looking for a good font, but I couldn't find one, so I settled with this. I don't really like it, but whatever
Well first the bg needs some more work, look like you have used 1 or maybe 2 filters and thats it. The render is kinda slammed on with no blending at all, and the text is hard to read because its white like the bg. When all is b6w the render kinda falls into the bg, blur it and perhaps darken the sides and move the render to the right. I would recommend you to follow some tuts here on the void to get the hang on the techniques.