c&c+rating 3 versions also the stock
V1:
http://i32.tinypic.com/5bb6g9.png
V2:
http://i29.tinypic.com/dc5tw9.jpg
V3:
http://i25.tinypic.com/r1wt8z.jpg
Stock:
http://i29.tinypic.com/2ywibg1.jpg
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c&c+rating 3 versions also the stock
V1:
http://i32.tinypic.com/5bb6g9.png
V2:
http://i29.tinypic.com/dc5tw9.jpg
V3:
http://i25.tinypic.com/r1wt8z.jpg
Stock:
http://i29.tinypic.com/2ywibg1.jpg
Hm.. I see 0 comments here :(
OK... I would say that is not bad...
And I think v2 is the best,..
I would lower the opacity of those bubbles...
And of course the focal point more visible,
don't make it similar to BG.
But for me it's good :)
thank you man and not sure y people dont comment but ty for the reply :)
I agree with Garis.
There doesn't really seem to be a point to focus in on when you 1st look at it.
Also, try to add some lighting to it, it's eems to be pretty much monotone across the render.
Looks good though.
Make the focal/render more visible, it's kind of hard to distinguish between it and the BG. Rest is good, i like the black an white....more intense.
Border takes a lot away from the sig though. Stick to cinema borders, and 1 px stroke.
Text is good though.
thanks everyone i really like this one..
I would like the render to stand out some more right now its a bit hard to see it. v2 is best and i too like the text good job on that. keep on going man:)
