Digital Ninja

V1:
http://i32.tinypic.com/15gpe04.png
V2:
http://i26.tinypic.com/rmutyo.png

nice following of tutorial.

thank you ;)

http://i25.tinypic.com/2w5voua.png

It's ind of hard to identify the difference between the BG and the render. Maybe it's because I have no idea what the render is for lack of animation/whatever knowledge. I dunno.

The text isn't bad. The pen tooling gets pretty distracting. maybe tone it down a bit?

I would suggest blurring some of the BG too. Thats just my opinion though.

light source looks good, though a tad bit off. Bg goes really really well with the render. So gj with those.

thanks man.. yea the light source should be on the left side...

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Originally Posted by paparoksguitar

It's ind of hard to identify the difference between the BG and the render. Maybe it's because I have no idea what the render is for lack of animation/whatever knowledge. I dunno.

The text isn't bad. The pen tooling gets pretty distracting. maybe tone it down a bit?

I would suggest blurring some of the BG too. Thats just my opinion though.

light source looks good, though a tad bit off. Bg goes really really well with the render. So gj with those.

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instead of saying all that again i just quote papa :)
keep on and let me introduce myself im daemon lmao. I am a happy person friends with everyone:)