Slash Sig

I was experementing and i came out with this:

http://i29.tinypic.com/14igxoh.jpg
did i get the text right this time :)?

Anyone?

Am.. I like the blue color there :)
Maybe I move the text to the bottom..
And I would remove those pink lines..
Need some more effects on the both sides of the BG..
Anyway its still looks nice :)

Text needs work, but it looks sweet. Kind of vectorish.

There are too many C4ds. I think it's great for people to use c4d's. If you've looked at any of my tuts you'll see I use quite a few myself.
However when you use them you have to blend them in more.
I do like the pink pen tooling though. The coloring is awesome. Just make the background go a bit better with the c4d and it'll be ace.

ok bt its just two c4d's ill work on my bg

I just don't think Slash fits very well with c4ds

I'd move the text in front of him or sumthin' like that..

Remove the pink lines and darken the c4ds on the right side