please tell me wat you think
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please tell me wat you think
http://i27.tinypic.com/2817k82.png
This is a bit too busy for my taste.
You text (kinda looks like matrix text) is too big.
You should try a couple tuts on sigs they will help you with some techniques and teach you a lot, this one is just a bit out of control and can't really tell whats going on.
^^ i would have to say the things like above, try out some tuts here to get the basics